Original Passage 4 with the paraphrase ..

The Original Passage

Speed is everything on the way to Mars and not only because a seven-month trip in a confined space can be torturous. The bigger problem is that it can be lethal because of radiation exposure in deep space, where the absence of Earth's magnetic field leaves astronauts far more exposed to deadly cosmic energy than they are orbit or on the way to moon.


The speeding is the important thing on the way to Mars because the distance of the trip in a cramped space could be torturous. The biggest problem is that could be fatal.because of the radiation in the deep space,where the absence of Earth's magnetic field leaves astronauts uncovered and improbability not survive on their way to the moon.(Kluger,2004,p48)..
 

My favorite place ...

Hi there 

I would love to talk about my favorite place that i spend most of my free time.

Every month my family and I go to the beach to spend our

time over there. The beach has a nice color with a great

movement. Also, it has a nice view; when I see it I remember my

past. In addition, the beach has beautiful smell like salt, because it

has salt in it and fish. Sometimes I swim in the ocean for two hours

and I have a good time inside the water. Otherwise, the water of the

ocean is good for skin, making you shiny and soft. Also, the beach

has a nice sound of the waves when it's moved by the air. Most of

the people like the beach; especially children, because they can swim. 

in it or make a castle from the sand. My family loves to go there

every month to spend our holiday. My father likes to make for us

barbecue for a dinner and we like his barbecue, because he mixes it

with a delicious sauces. In my opinion, the beach is the best place to

spend time with your family and your kids.

Lets Get Soak

Hi there

I had a great time before school started, my friends and I rented a house in the mountains.
We went shopping, barbequed at the lake, and had a great water fight. We filled hundreds of balloons with water,and put them in a big bucket . Someone yelled "GO" and we all ran for the bucket.  Soon enough everyone was soaked and chasing each other.  But even when the balloons were all gone, the water fight continued.  People were running for cups and bowls of water and somehow the water fight continued inside the house.  The place was completely wet.  It was seriously one of the best times and couldn't stop laughing.  Watching my friends slipping and sliding everywhere was hilarious.